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this is me telling
you that we'd be great if "we"
didn't include "me"
i wrote a haiku.
i think i'm going crazy. maybe. probably.
in any case, i apologize for multiple posts in one day.
but i liked these words
and i never really wrote a haiku before
so i thought i should try. the end.
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:iconfrecklesx33:
frecklesx33 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010
my goodness. you are brilliant.
please don't apologize for posting multiple posts in one day. i'm sure that everyone who reads your work is ecstatic when you post more than once a day. :hug:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010   Writer
thank you so much. (:
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:iconfallenheartedvampire:
FallenHeartedVampire Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009
I love your work
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2009   Writer
and that makes me smile so much.
:heart:
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:iconfallenheartedvampire:
FallenHeartedVampire Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2009
Good. I'm glad someone is smiling. :aww:
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:iconforbidden-fairie:
Forbidden-Fairie Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
nice! I will show you my blog soon!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009   Writer
thank you. sounds good (:
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:iconhelzcullen:
HelzCullen Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
Happy haiku (:
And -
don't go crazy without me.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2009   Writer
i wouldn't dream of it.
you can go with me, of course.
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:iconlgthaoshi14:
LgthAoshi14 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2009
my hat goes off to you. i can't write 575 to save my life.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009   Writer
sh, neither can i.
this is just one of those happy accidents.
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:iconmisspelledink:
misspelledink Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2009  Professional General Artist
its so simple and beautiful but absolutely amazing, yet affective and stands out all on it's own.

mind if I use it as inspiration for a visual piece?
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2009   Writer
do it, for sure.
i was actually thinking the same thing last night and played around with the idea and came up a little on the blank side.
so yes, most definitely do something.
(as if you even needed to ask. <3)
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:iconaka-ash:
aka-ash Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009
it's just perfect, really.
:heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009   Writer
thank you sososo much, love.

:heart:!!
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:iconoffbyzero:
offbyzero Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
I like this.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009   Writer
:heart:

thanks, love.
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:iconwritersxsparkx:
WritersXSparkX Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
I love it. I can relate to this. It's like every break up I've gone through all rolled into three simple lines. I've only seen two of your works so far, but I love what you write already.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009   Writer
jflkdajslfja, i already know that you are far too lovely.
thank you so so much :heart:
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:iconiheldyoucloser:
iheldyoucloser Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2009
i feel the exact same way.
favorite haiku ever.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2009   Writer
aw, thank you!!
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:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
Hot-Sauce-Vixxen Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
Oh you writing everything brilliantly. <3
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2009   Writer
haha, i'm not sure that's true but i try. <3456
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Hot-Sauce-Vixxen Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
<3
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:iconawasteof-paint:
Awasteof-paint Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
so, you are definately miss. clever at writing haikus now, aren't you? (: :heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
haha, i think probably no.
i'm more like miss. pretends to even know how to write haikus and then fakes that they're clever.
it's a pretty long name, really.

:heart:
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:icondeadxbirds:
deadxbirds Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
i like this. it's short but powerful.

and i love haikus!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2009   Writer
thank you!
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:iconandyslade:
andyslade Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
Perfect.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
thank you so much.
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GirlOfGreys Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009  Professional Photographer
I like this haiku. ^ ^
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
thanks!!
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:icongirlofgreys:
GirlOfGreys Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009  Professional Photographer
Your welcome!
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the-popcorn-tree Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
i love how the simplicity of these words can still impact me as much as your other works.
(usually, though, haikus are about nature.)
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
thank you.

(and that may be true of the original japanese haiku but i don't think we should be tied in by such rules. annnnnd i guess, english haikus have less of a tendency to be nature focused since really we don't live in nature. we live in cities so they just focus on things we find to have a greater importance than others. or something like that. i looked it up. because i'm crazy. but traditionally, you're correct.)
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh my :heart: I really really love haikus and this is an amaaazing one :love:

but what if i said
that if we didn't include you
it would break my heart
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
i always love haikus too!
except i could never write one.
so i'm excited that i finally managed too.

:heart:
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yaaaay :heart: :love: Haikus are quite fun but very challenging.
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:iconkoolkyd22:
Koolkyd22 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
It's official, you can write beauty with anything and about anything.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
aw, you are far too nice to me.
but i'm glad you think that.
and also, this is probably my favorite comment of the day.
thank you times 79780980.
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Koolkyd22 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
Haha, trust me, I don't give praise lightly. Especially when it comes to writing. You're really, really talented.
Like, crazy crazy talented.
Your welcome times 79780981. :)
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:iconmr-youse:
mr-youse Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
very well said. tragic, but very well said. :-)
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009   Writer
yeahhh, it is tragic.
i think maybe i'm a bit tragic.
but also, thanks so much!!! (:
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:iconmr-youse:
mr-youse Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
you're welcome!
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:iconesotericheart:
EsotericHeart Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
Haikus = win
Your haiku = win
You = win
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009   Writer
you = more win.
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:iconesotericheart:
EsotericHeart Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
Liesss.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009   Writer
nope, not even at all.
truthsss.
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:iconesotericheart:
EsotericHeart Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
Fine. But only if you agree that you are win, too. ♥
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almostlovers Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
this is amazing and incredibly perfect. :heart:
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