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Maybe the problem is that I don't know what a love story should sound like. I haven't figured out what order I should put the words in to make it read just right. I do, however, know what it feels like, but pushing around nouns and adjectives just to make it grow is the hardest thing I'll ever do. And it's true that I've tried it before and maybe I succeeded once, but since then I've learned the way real love washes through veins, and rumbles through the shifting and settling of bones until it changes you completely in a way that is absolutely unyielding. Perfect. Simple. It's not angry, or jealous, it doesn't hurt. It isn't like before. So now words don't come so easy, since I'm not sure which ones will cheapening the moments, the feelings, you.

And god, I could never do that to you, since the only thing I know with completely certainty is that you are the only thing that saves me. That moves me. That completes me. Without you, I'd be less than nothing. Alone. Forgotten. It's easy to think you love someone, but to make them feel needed, wanted, loved…is a completely different story. One that you've rewritten every day since I met you.

I want to tell you something that will change the course of the world forever. I want to tell you something big, like what created stars, made them grow and die before our eyes or how the ocean sounds to someone who's never seen it with their own eyes. I want to tell you that forever will never be long enough with you. I want to tell you that I was made to love you, but I'm getting the feeling that no amount of words will ever be enough for that. I want to tell you everything, but for now, I'll just sit here, with your hand in mine and watch in silence as love grows. It's easy. It's perfect. It's ours.
in progress. always always.

my writing's not quite what it used to be, but i'm working on it.
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angryangel57 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student General Artist
please write some more,you are amazing
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Eternal-Skye Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this very much! :iconinloveplz:

It seems so simple yet when I read it, it is always so strong, moving. I really love all of your work.
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   Writer
Thank you so much. This means the world to me.
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PanicsShadow Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
this is absolutely so beautiful:)
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   Writer
thank you!
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PanicsShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
^.^ youre welcome
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ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
you are so happy, aren't you steph.
this makes me super happy too.
i miss you
and i swear i will make wisconsin closer
to colorado just so i can meet you
and hug you to death
:heart:

(oh, and in case i haven't told you enough
this is just stunning.
as always)
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   Writer
SO HAPPY.

thank you!! i miss you as well <3
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ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
you deserve it ALL.

:heart:
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AkaYuki2106 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
This is so beautiful <3
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