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the places we keep our hearts. by paperheartsyndrome the places we keep our hearts. by paperheartsyndrome
since i can't seem to write much.
i decided to make another typography piece.

i think this one is weird maybe. i was just having fun (:

it says:
this is the sound of our bones settling against each other
so that your hand fits into mine
our hearts are shifting and collecting in the spaces between us
so that each beat bring us closer to where we're supposed to be:
together.
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:iconfableweaver55:
fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Omigod, terribly beautiful Love 
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!

As part of a Found Poetry: Titles as Art project brought to us by =SilverInkblot and found in our new group, #TheTitlePage, I have used the title of this lovely deviation in a poem here:

Treading the Horizon

Thank you so much!

:heart:
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theEternalDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This deviation has been featured here . It’s just a little showcase in my journal so it’s not much, but I thought you did an awesome job. ^^

Your words have such a smooth rhythm to them and they're very fresh. Sometimes I read this and think to myself 'I want to have a moment like that!' haha ^^; Very good work!
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iAlish Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
Oh my gosh.
this is like the smartest way of reading XD.
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   Writer
ah. i love this comment. thank you <3
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:iconjosephine12cute:
josephine12cute Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Student General Artist
very beautiful... that's really meaningful and very powerful... nice job well done :)
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011   Writer
thank you!!
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tossingpaw Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
this is lovely. he's a lucky one!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011   Writer
thank you.

and he really wasn't. i have the feeling i was but it doesn't matter anymore.
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tossingpaw Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
it happens. so far, i've realized that's the only way we have to learn, anyway...at least you can say you still have a nice piece of typography :)
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bookwurmzhao Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
You've pretty much just made me fall in love with typography... :heart: Thank you for that.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010   Writer
EEE. this makes me feel accomplished.
thanks right back at you <3
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SolsticeDream Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
:heart:
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010   Writer
:heart: :heart: :heart:
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aaambermichelle Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
cute. i love it :D
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:iconfromutterkindness:
FromUtterKindness Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010
captures the tense affection of young hearts
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ShallowOblivion Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010   Writer
I always love your typography; keep up the beautiful work with the words that make me smile C:
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:iconhopeannfaith:
Hopeannfaith Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
This piece is visually and emotionally deep...Placing the words as you did...to fit together as if on purpose...
Very well done.

You do write "much" and well! The visualization just served to make the penetration somehow deeper, more intimate!

Well done!
Blessings :heart:
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MaireeMargaret Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
congrats on the DLD!
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:iconweird-beard:
weird-beard Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this poem, especially the typography part. Very inspiring, I must try it! :D
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article [link] and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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1Walkingblind Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Apart from having a wonderful visual presence this poem
contains the essence of togetherness. With words that portray the yearning one feels around that special someone.
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:iconfinestperspective:
FinestPerspective Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
I want to comment but I seriously can't find the words to describe how I feel about this piece.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010   Writer
awh. well you definitely said enough.
thank you so much.
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shinchai Featured By Owner May 25, 2010
*likes brackets*
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 25, 2010   Writer
haha, thank youuu. (: i do too.
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shinchai Featured By Owner May 31, 2010
:tighthug: you're welcome~
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vadimtudor Featured By Owner May 18, 2010
The design is quite simple, but the message is crystal clear this way; personally, I like a more detailed and scrambled design, so that I look at it as a challenge when trying to understand the message, and by the time I get to the end of it, it feels so much better when you think of the message and interpret it... Anyways, :+favlove:
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 25, 2010   Writer
haha, so you like the challenge? (: that's cute.
sometimes, i can't think of enough to say to make the bigger ones.
plus it takes a lotttt longer buuut i think i like the more complex more also. (:
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vadimtudor Featured By Owner May 28, 2010
I always enjoy something that challenges me intellectually meaning, this is just how I am :D

Even if there isn't enough to say, you can spend some time trying to think of various ways of expressing yourself, until you find the one you consider it fits the best :)
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edwardluvsbella Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
awww i love this! :heart:
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 12, 2010   Writer
thank you! <3
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DesolatePages Featured By Owner May 6, 2010
I love this. Great job!
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 12, 2010   Writer
i'm so glad.
thank you so much. (:
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greatestbunny4ever Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
This is so beautiful I love it :heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 12, 2010   Writer
thank you so much. <3
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greatestbunny4ever Featured By Owner May 12, 2010
you're quite welcome, Paperheart I love your work.
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StickANeedleInMyEye Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
I don't think it's weird at all.
I like it a lot! :D :heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Writer
thank you!
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adernlock Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010
I think this is just gorgeous.
Lovelove.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Writer
thanks so much. <3
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MazManga Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
i ADORE your typography pieces. may i ask, is it ok if i use this as a formspring background?? :)
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Writer
sure sure. i don't mind as long as you don't intend to pretend like you made it. (:

thank you.
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MazManga Featured By Owner May 4, 2010
i neverever do xD
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:iconlarroney:
larroney Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Student Writer
Absolutely adorable.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Writer
thanks so much.
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aughters Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
Eh, the background's kind of dull and unimpressive up close.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010   Writer
nothing ever is so beautiful up close.

(ps. this piece is hardly about the background. it's really not supposed to be so impressive as to take away from the typography)
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aughters Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010
It could have just been on a white background or had some kind of colorful glyph under it. Don't get me wrong, the typography is good, I'm just distracted by the background; and that might just be my preference.
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storyofmylife054 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Wonderful job. It's beautiful. (:
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