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a.
we drive faster at night
so that the world is streaks of light ripping through the darkness
and i press my face against the window
and watch stars die in the sky

[sometimes, i wonder if they're just shutting their eyes
so they don't have to see this mess called 'us'.]

b.
you were lightning in a bottle
bolts striking cracked glass sides trying to escape
and it's my glowinthedark vision
that makes you glitter more brightly when
you finally get blown out

[make a wish
just remember they never come true
or else, i would have just wished for you.]

c.
i've been trying to swallow all the dust rain
that floats in front of sunny windowpanes
since it's all i have left
from before you were gone

[some days, i like to pretend
i'm breathing you in
instead of just choking on the past.]

d.
lately i feel like i'm losing my memories
but only the space between now and when i last saw you
so while i'm busy trying to erase you
it always seems like every yesterday was suitcases by the door
and mumbled 'this-isn't-really-working-anymores'
if time heals all wounds
why are all the clocks ticking backwards

this isn't what i meant when i said forever

[i wonder if hearts have expiration dates
since i want to stop loving you.]
:iconpaperheartsyndrome:

Author's Comments

sempiternal
adj.
everlasting; eternal.

_________

this one needs work, i think. But i like the word 'sempiternal'.
probably, will edit this one sooooooon.
So if you have any suggestions, let me know?
_________

Love me, love me
this is how I'm forced to live,
but I don't wanna live like that.
I don't wanna live knowing second words to me

-lydia
__________
05.02.09 6:32pm

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:iconlyriclover627:
I do love this very much! The [endings] of every stanza place brings the separate paragraphs together PERFECTLY. They're beautiful in a very clever way and you are brilliant. :+fav: :hug:

--
“Damaged people are dangerous because they know they can survive.”
:iconjustlistenonce:
the last little bit is beautiful.
this is amazinngg.


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[link]
:butterflytwo:
:iconeefera:
Wow... always fabulous.

-Eefera

--

I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

:iconshadowedwintereyes:
dont change a thing, its priceless.
:iconreverie-lwye-and-el:
i love this one too. gosh, could you be any less amazing at this stuff?

--
Forever isn't as long as we think; after all, nothing lasts forever.

~Characterless~
:icongirlofgreys:
I love this! and im sad because for some reason i can't fave this...

--
~Love is like a photograph...they both develop in darkness.~
:iconjesperla:
I really love this whole thing -especially letter a.
Lovely. :heart:
:iconbetweenthepages:
forever was made up to make promises break faster
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
You are a genius.

--
...if you know what I mean.

Sukkaaaaa. :heart::noes:

My icon was made my the ttly bitchin' ~numbah3 ILU. :blowkiss:

Well slap me with a fish and call me grandma!
:iconfierypoplartree:
I agree with all the above comments times a million.
and I wish I had half your talent.

and that made strange sense to me, your poem. i like it a lot.

--
And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.

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