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if this feeling is
drowning then i just hope i
never breathe again.
i think maybe you're my ocean. and these heartbeats are the sound of sinking as i fall into you.

i write haikus now when i can't write at all.
this will be scraps. i just like to share my nonsense with all of you. <3
plus, they're short unlike everything else i do. therefore, readable.
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:iconperidot-magelette:
peridot-magelette Featured By Owner May 13, 2010
like whoa.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 16, 2010   Writer
awh, thank you!
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:iconperidot-magelette:
peridot-magelette Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
you're welcome!
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:iconshinchai:
shinchai Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010
everyone's said everything worth saying D:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Writer
thank you <3
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:iconshinchai:
shinchai Featured By Owner May 8, 2010
you're very welcome :)
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:iconspamuel:
Spamuel Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010   Writer
!!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010   Writer
exclamations are always good. (:
thank you
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:iconnomad1618:
Nomad1618 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
Simple. Stunning. Reaches me. =) i love it.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010   Writer
thanks so much!
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:iconpetit--loup:
petit--loup Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Student Writer
I can't explain in words how much I love this
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010   Writer
awh, thank you so much!
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:iconpetit--loup:
petit--loup Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010  Student Writer
^_^
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:iconpetit--loup:
petit--loup Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Student Writer
I can't explain in words how much I love this
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:iconpetit--loup:
petit--loup Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Student Writer
Sorry for the double post
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:iconlgthaoshi14:
LgthAoshi14 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
dont scrap this. this is so bitter sweet, it's heart wrenching...
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009   Writer
no scraps!! (:

thanks.
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:iconoffbyzero:
offbyzero Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
I do quite like this sequence.
It's simple and straightforward but rather lovely.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009   Writer
thanks, love.
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:iconforbidden-fairie:
Forbidden-Fairie Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I see! ^^
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:iconmeeden:
meeden Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009
featured :butterfly:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009   Writer
:heart:!
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:iconthestabbingrapper:
TheStabbingRapper Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
...wow
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2009   Writer
:heart:
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:iconthefoolwhofollowsyou:
You write things I actually enjoy reading. How very impressive!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009   Writer
awh, you're so freaking lovely.
thank you.
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Buuut haikus ROCK :heart: :giggle:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009   Writer
i think i'd have to agree. <3
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:icondivineplay:
divineplay Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
Haha, I know what ur saying.

I like it :)
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009   Writer
i'm glad. sometimes, i'm afraid of being misunderstood.

thank you. :heart:
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:iconalchemistandrew1234:
AlchemistAndrew1234 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
Made me smile on an day of uncertain weather.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009   Writer
i'm glad to hear that. (:
thank you.
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:iconalchemistandrew1234:
AlchemistAndrew1234 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
You're very welcome.
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cyberdelika Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
wow, that's beautiful.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
thanks so much.
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:iconknockmeoutt:
KnockMeOutt Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
I know it's short, but I find it adorably cute :heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
blee, i'm glad. :heart:
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:iconloverz116:
loverz116 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
i couldn't have put better words myself. :heart: your haikus are just as powerful and raw as your long poems.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
you're such a sweetheart.
thank you times a million.
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:iconloverz116:
loverz116 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009
thankyousomuch
you're most welcome! :heart:
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:icondarkened-door:
Darkened-Door Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
I actually rather like haiku's, and this one is no exception. Good job as usual.
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
i tend to suck at haikus.
this is me pretending i can write them.
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:iconraeliee:
Raeliee Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
I love this...It's pretty!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
thank you sososo muchhhh.
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Hot-Sauce-Vixxen Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
asfdhglkal! :heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
jflhfdkada. :heart:!!!
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Hot-Sauce-Vixxen Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009
:cuddle:
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iheldyoucloser Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
best haiku ever.
:heart:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009   Writer
psh, i doubt it.
but you've just made me 8473919 times happier. so i'll take it.

(also, in case i've never said it. i love your signature, broken social scene=love.)
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iheldyoucloser Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009
that song makes me complete. <3
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