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There are a lot of things I can't tell you.

Not because I'm keeping secrets locked behind my teeth or because I'm afraid I'll say something you don't want to hear. This isn't like the last time or the time before. It's simply because I'll never have the exact right words to explain all the ways you make my heart rise and expand and skip a beat.

There aren't enough words to describe how quickly the blood rushes through my veins when we kiss and I'm on tiptoes to reach your lips and your hand is cupping my face, brushing your thumb across my cheekbone and I feel completely at home.

And they haven't even invented a way to portray how I feel when we're driving too fast in the streets of our hometown, and how I can get lost somewhere that is so damn familiar because I have the chance to explore it with someone new – someone like you – and you're singing along with the radio, letting me fall asleep in the passenger seat, because you and I are enough, and we don't need words to fill the silence in between.

And I can't imagine a way to tell you that I can see a future when I look into your eyes as you're walking me to my door like you do each and every night, promising to drive me seventeen hours and one minute to the coast just because I told you I've never seen an ocean crash along the shoreline. I swear I could drown in moments like these and never complain.

I'm not calling it perfect, but it's the closest I've ever found since when I'm in your arms I can forget the world completely and all the ways it's hurt me. And there are a lot of things I can't tell you, but I'm hoping, wishing and praying that you already know.
a bit rough, i think it needs some work.
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peridot-magelette Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
i like this rough. doesn't need any work. :+favlove:
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   Writer
thank you <3
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esstera Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
you managed to portray the very essence of love. that realism, even roughness is what gives this work a deep meaning.
I red it many many times, shared it with my friends...breathless.
thank you for sharing this with the world :)
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012   Writer
thank you so much! that's super sweet. <3
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sacredsamurai Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
it's cool when someone else says what you yourself are feeling
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012   Writer
I'm a fan of that feeling.
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wingedkupoheart Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student General Artist
beautiful :)
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angryangel57 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student General Artist
<3
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unstellastique Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I loved this so much, I don't think it needs any work at all. Flowed perfectly and each thing you described is just so lovely.

<3
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012   Writer
hey you (: it's good to see you back!

and thank you so much. life makes me super happy right now!
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